First Cut:
Feedback from the first cut:
The feedback that I got was I should add more to the sequence of my actress on the bed to show more time passing. I was also told that I had spelling and grammar issue, although when I watched the video back I couldn't find any. I was also told to film in a different location since the room I was filming in was messy. I did that on purpose since I wanted the character to seem lazy like they always left their work till the last minute. I was also told to film at different times of the day to make it seem like the character had been working the whole day. Instead of reshooting during different times of the day, i'll color grade some of the clips differently to make it seem like its later at night.
Second cut:
The feedback that I received on my second cut was to try and re-film the scene of my actress trying to complete her work on her bed since i wasn't using a tripod and it would've looked better with a tripod. However, I wasn't able to film with her since she has been studying for her exams. So instead I tried my best to stabilize the shots to make it seem like 1 long take without me moving. I also changed up the TOS since my grammar was a little wrong in the second cut.
Third cut
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