Peer/Teacher feedback Video CV Draft 1

I need to remember to keep lighting and the mis en scene in mind from the next draft as the lighting for this draft was poor due to the restrictions of my room. I also need to remember to talk slower as a few students found it difficult for them to understand me.

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Since a majority of people liked the editing and the graphics on screen in this draft I will try to make the 2nd draft as similar as possible.

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I will wear a shirt instead of a t-shirt and I can also try speaking slower while recording the next video.

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I could have had a different background instead of a plain white wall

I can try speaking slower next time to try and make it easier for the people watching the video to understand what I am saying

Since everyone that I interviewed found my information relevant I will try adding more information that may be of the same relevance like my technical skills.