the feedback I got:
Can you find a way to aim it more on the target audience.
Choose a dish more interesting even though it is not about food or cooking, it much more appealing to your audience.
You should add more graphs in the chart to shows all your primary research you only shown 3 charts about this.
My response:
I don't think it is any more possible to find a way to aim it more for my target audience as 15-25 year old mainly cook simple items like noodles unless they want to have a proper meal which they would most of the time just order from outside, that's why I chose to make noodles. I also chose it because it doesn't take that long to make simple noodles and it would be easy to explain everything i need to in the 5-7 minutes I have.
I can't really add any more graphs because I asked a lot of open ended questions which I could not create a graph out of.
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