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Feedback on my first cut

  • Writer: Mahin Karani
    Mahin Karani
  • Jul 4, 2021
  • 1 min read

I could add a title before the video begins showing what the documentary is about


i could try adding some like small fun facts throughout the video because most of the information i found was from the WHO themselves

I can add graphics and visuals to help the video. Im not really sure how to better get my point across.

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