From the feedback received from my peers, I have decided to reduce the numbers of scenes I will have as most of my peers told me that my advert would end up being too long. I will do this by removing the beginning shots of landmarks as I knew that those would take up a lot of time. Instead of starting with the landmarks I will start with the car scene instantly. By doing this I can show my brother playing on his iPad in the car. This fits in with my research as well as most parents that answered my survey by saying that when their child/children are playing they are happy.
I will also be changing the classroom scene from 1 student and 1 teacher to a lot of students entering 1 class at the same time. I made this change because I realized that it would be a lot more difficult for me to get an entire classroom cooperate with me. So I will just make them enter the classroom, then I can show them smiling as they enter the classroom.
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