Again when everyone is walking into the classroom, it needs to be really clear that this is a place of happiness. This is difficult with masks on so think about how you can get your actors to use body language to encourage this more.
Do you need to film everyone walking in? Could you possibly just film a couple of people and then have something happening in the classroom that promotes happiness? ( Perhaps students enjoying their learning etc?)
Your slogan is 'spread smiles' perhaps you could put this over an image of someone smiling rather than anything else?
When the actors are eating together, perhaps you could have them engaging more and smiling more?
Star: I really like how you used color to signify happiness of the advert. Star: I felt like the scene with your friends in Pizza Hut was really good.
Wish: I feel like at the beginning of the advert you don’t know what’s going on its a bit unclear. Wish: I feel like maybe you could add a voiceover to help the audience understand what’s going on.
Star: his use of monochrome grey colours vs the saturated colors do well and have great contrast to show the happiness parts of the ad.
Star: i like the scene where the group of friends are eating because you can really see them enjoying themselves and being happy.
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